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Even down to the title this is a very creative way to view Kakkarot and Vegeta's relationship. A lot of people either start it off as a one way love, or as a relationship between love sick puppies. But I can actually read through this without cringing at either individuals' behavior, especially Vegeta because I am very picky with the way his character is written(You'd think I was Akira Toriyama or something) But I do love how you have Vegeta in this, he's a bit more whiny than I'm used to but Kakkarot's response to it and the way Vegeta handles himself in general makes it pretty easy for me to overlook that. I do hope you continue. I love the idea of them having an affair behind everyone's back especially when it's getting a lot more serious than they both expected. Keep up the good work! And update when you can!

BlackPhoenix

This is some seriously sexy and kinky play going on!! Also, loved the 9000 and power pole jokes ;-).

Interesting and mysteries!!! I look forward to your next update!!