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for Resolution on a Lonely Planet

by Ulrike

person LadyAlucard
schedule November 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Once again just here to beg you not to abandon this story Dx
Sorry if Im being a bother or anything, I dont mind waiting for chapters, Im just worried you wont finish (:
If you do end up not finishing, would you mind spoiling me with the ending? D: I desperately need to know how it ends Dx
person cara9001
schedule September 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta vaguely remembering things and screaming while he was trapped in his own mind was so sad and perfect I loved it! I think a piece of my soul was ripped out T~T
person LadyAlucard
schedule September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I dont really know what to comment on in this chapter other then I'm glad to see Vegeta's memories finally returning (which makes me an awful person) :D
I'm even more glad you included Goku's thoughts on the situation. Poor Goku really, his faith in humanity, and the goodness in people, is going down the drain D:
Still can't wait where you are going with this in the end. It seemed like you were aiming to end up with the canon story and I guess it's still possible, but I wonder how Vegeta's gonna react to everybody, especially Bulma, once he fully gets his memories back.

Anyway, great chapter as usual (: I wanna know how the story ends soooooo bad xD Wont you spoil it a little? xD
person Nelicquele79
schedule August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good! Can't wait for more!!
person cara9001
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I'm super happy you updated XD And I like where you're going with this training with Trunks! It sounds like it's going to be really interesting.
person LadyAlucard
schedule July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, this chapter was somewhat hard to read for me. It's almost painful how it's Trunks who first reminds Vegeta of what happend to him. Or, well he doesn't really remind him I guess, but it does feel like Trunks set something in motion that will bring Vegetas memories back to him. And that is somehow really sad. Trunks is after all, the only really innocent person here.
And I do agree with Yamcha. It really wasn't fair of Bulma to bring a child into this messed up situation. How can she even live with herself? I'm really sorry, as I am not sure if you were aiming to make Bulma unlikable, but I can't stand her at all in this fic. Everything she does and did is just so messed up.
Oh and I looooved how you made Goku give a hint of being uncomfortable with lying to Vegeta! Thank you for updating once again! (:
person Lady
schedule June 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating! I think I would die if I never found out how this story ended haha :D
True that this is quite a strange chapter as it seems so unrelated to the real plot, but I love the background you gave the Sayjans here. I always wanted to belive that they are not purely bad. I'd also really love to know what Goku and the rest of the Z-fighters think of the Vegeta situation at this point and how they behave towards him. Goku was quite disapproving of lying about the "Hate being right" incident after all and I cant see him acting like nothings changed around him (or the Briefs). Krillin as well, I picture him being overly nice to Vegeta, constantly thinking about what happened.

Im really looking forward to the next chapter already!
person Lady
schedule June 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I just thought I'd come here to beg you not to abandon this story haha xD
Please please please keep writing? :D Or spoil me with the ending so I can imagine how everything plays out :P
person Lady
schedule March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally :D I've waited sooooooo long for the next chapter.
Although I'm reaaaaaally unhappy that Bulma and Vegeta seemed to have ended up together?! D:<
Bad Bulma, I DO hope that Vegeta regains his memories. You are a horrible person lady!! (I mean Bulma, not you, you're kind of awesome ;D)
person cara
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I really didn't think that Yamcha would gather the dragon balls and wish Vegeta's memories away! XD
It'll be really interesting seeing how the others act around Vegeta and how he gets his memory back.

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