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Argh!!! Oh no it really did happen in the end Dx
Vegetas memories got blocked. Well at least Piccolo agrees with me "“The dragon-balls are not to be used for selfish, personal wishes such as this! They cannot be the answer to everything!”

I hope you don't mind my critique, but I felt like this chapter was moving extremely fast. Like Yamcha disappears and not even 5 seconds later has the dragonballs. Another 5seconds later he made his wish and Piccolo is upon him. Then Bulma, Krillin and Tien seem to arrive at CC really fast. And how the heck did Bulma know to ask Vegeta for his last memory when she didn't know about the wish at that point?

I really really hope your not going to end up with BulmaxVegeta at this point. I really don't think I can forgive what has been done and I doubt Vegeta can either.

My poor poor heart D:
This is terrible, how do you plan to EVER give any kind of closure to this?
And now it's not only Vegeta but Goku as well. He's losing his faith in humanity and for good reasons as well.
I really can't help but hate Tien. That man, seriously! I hope he will finally "see the light" now :/

This is definitely a very emotional story. Hatred, jealousy, love, trust, hope, desire....all of it is in here. Thanks for the updates!

*uncontrollable sobbing* it's so sad but I love it T~T

I love the story so far. The last scene with bulma was very well written :)

I really love how you had him pause before taking his pants off. I could tell that he was thinking about how those guys had made fun of his underwear and that he was worried Bulma would think the same thing. Or at least that's what I'm pretty sure what happened. That was probably one of my favorite parts of chapter ten. XD
Wonderful chapter!

Beautiful chapter! I think you did great on the sex scene! I know that this won't be just another 3 year fic, I feel like things are going to get very interesting. XD
I'm terrified and really excited to find out what doctor Briefs is going to do about all of this. Anyway I love it and it was a brilliant chapter!

That was a fantastic lemon!!! Extremely sexy, hot and desirable. Excellent work for being new to writing erotica.
Also, the story is very interesting. I like how everyone is in this story but, of course, Dr Briefs. It is very hard to see him be so OOC but I know this is your story and an AU.
Hopefully we will all like the resolution by the end of the story. Thanks for posting!

Great! the update was worth to wait for, it has pace, that is good many just hurry a lot, I love it

I love this story more than words can describe!