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I am curious as to whether this will be a BulmaxVegeta, or a YamchaxVegeta - Bulma seems to have the upper hand at the moment but Vegeta will have to work out her betrayal via the remote at some point in time.

I love you, thanks for the update. love the way you pay attention to the details in the story, i'll keep reading, please keep writing

Thank you so much for updating! I have not expected Dr. Briefs to make outright lies to Goku, but such beeing that serious is an interesting character trait. Normally he has no say in the stories. I am looking forward to how the situation will be resolved. Will Bulma act against her father's decision? Will Vegeta find out about the deceit? Please keep on writing!

Thank you thank you thank you for the update i'm loving it. all of it, you're are GREAT

I'm glad you updated! I did prefer Vegeta's feelings towards yamcha before he passed out at the end of last chapter though lol.

Great chapter! Although I do think all hell is going to break loose once Goku and Vegeta find out the truth. And I know Dr. Briefs is trying to protect his family but it is so OOC for him to lie like that. Good story!

Oh oh, I wonder what the others are gonna think witnessing this :(

I really hope you have Bruce back in this story. He was my favorite in the last one, how he had sex with vegeta was always enjoyable to read. I love a uke vegeta especially him having no choice in the matter.

I have to concur to pallyndromes opinion, although I cannot see a really /happy/ ending. There is no really happy ending to something like this. And I dont agree with Vegeta trusting Bulma 'again'. I know that she's doing what she thinks is right, but no(!) she has no right to do this to another person. This stupid drug she created started this huge mess and instead of setting it right and destroying the drug she and her father chose to make a messy situation messier. No, just NO! I'm waiting for Goku to hear about the fact that Vegeta's being kept prisoner. I'm curious about his reaction as I cannot picture any kind of reaction from him besides being outraged (something that he couldnt really act upon). I simply cannot wait for the next chapter!

So glad you're updating so quickly! Keep it up :)