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I'm not sure there's much point in me asking for this, since in the past story it just got darker and darker anyway lol, but I hope that Bulma gives Vegeta his power back and he comes to trust her again. I really hope this story does not have a sad ending like the last one! Please?

I feel terrible for Vegeta and honestly can't see him moving on at this point without somebody using the dragonballs to make him forget this whole thing happened (and I really dont want that to happen. The dragonballs can't be the answer to everything). It will be even worse once he finds out that not only Goku knows what happened but EVERYBODY that he knows. Can't wait for a confrontation between Yamcha and Vegeta either. That's ought to get really awkward.

I've got a question though: Are you gonna pair anybody up here? Cause I can see subtle hints of multiple pairings. Being a GokuxVegeta lover I'd like them to happen of course haha, but since Goku mentioned Trunks and you constantly give hints towards BulmaxVegeta I guess they are the most obvious option here. I wouldnt mind there being no pairing either since somehow I feel that would be the most believable ending.

I also feel terrible for Goku. Tien should try to think before he speaks. Can't help but dislike Tien in most fanfics that involve Vegeta. He's always the one that cannot accept him

I now have to say I feel sorry for Vegeta. To be that helpless when he isn't used to it. Another good chapter nice work on it.

This story is so goog. You should have dr.briefs start raping him now though :) pleaseeeeeeee and I liked Bruce too. He was my favorite .

I am so glad finding that you are writing a sequel for I hate being right!
I felt so giddy reading this and I feel so sorry for Vegeta. It seems like everybody in the whole fucking universe is out to get him D:
I cannot believe Bulma and Dr. Briefs did this to him

Very moving chapter. The story is quote good and explores the ethical side of life. Nice work!

"Don't tell Goku". That line is some deep foreshadowing. If Goku does find out and Vegeta is kept "caged", then Goku is going to go ballistic. Great chapter!

i love this story! please dont stop!!!