rate_review Reviews

Dude...

This story took me and brought me far away. I'm so taken by the feels. DEM FEELZ U KNOW!
This story was so different, so strange so "What the hell, this isn't reasonable, not at any point!" but when I read along, I was taken. The reader does not know how, why, the reader only knows: It's there for a long time and it's intense. Normally this description of a plot would be so flat and boring and unreasonable but your way of telling this, what you told and how you told it... it washed my soul away because it was so sappy and heartgrabbing.
The point when Goku met him and they interacted with eachother... my heart bleeded. x'D Ridiculous.
Your writing style and the words you've chosen were so ... can't describe it. Touching. One could FEEL what was going on and I LOVE that!

You did an awesome job! I will think of this masterpiece for a long long time. So touching, really!

xoxo, Mona

Simply lovely. Goku's fears and worries were real and well expressed. Description of the rain and the colors and the mud were perfect. I could see it.

Well well well! I was wondering when this was going to show up on here. Hey sweetie! I'm so happy you ended up posting this. And coincidentally, I still had the rough draft version of this you emailed me and I read it the other day! How awesome. Perfect as always dear. Drop me a line sometime! ^_^

Great story! Believable with nice tension after so many years & fitting metaphors. I could see it happening between them. :)

And here I thought for so long that you were done with writing... Hot damn you do good work! You inspire me. <3