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October 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise they being stronger than normal Saiyans, but surely Goku and Vegeta are stronger than them now?
I'm looking forward to how this is developing and hope your muses still make it Vegeta/Goku some how in the end :)
I'm looking forward to how this is developing and hope your muses still make it Vegeta/Goku some how in the end :)
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October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At first I wasn't too certain about this story, because it started off with OCs, and I'm not a huge fan of OCs, although I don't hate on them either. Depends on how well they are written.
Gave it a second shot. Seems to be going better, with a better plot than I had imagined. :P I'll continue to read in order to see how things progress.
Gave it a second shot. Seems to be going better, with a better plot than I had imagined. :P I'll continue to read in order to see how things progress.
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October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great last two lines of the chapter!!! I was wondering who was going to flinch first. LOL This story is exciting and believe or not, adorable, at the same time.
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September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. I just hope the Bulma is treated with dignity since she is Trunk's mother. And it will be interesting to see how Goku, Gohan and Goten come into play with these new characters, if at all.