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by YojiKato

person Ceecee
schedule May 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It was a good place to end. I love Duo's one track mind.
person waterwolf
schedule May 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow
I mean, it's not that its a bad ending. I too did not expect it to end so quickly. Here's to wishing for more side stories, or maybe little snippets of what others were thinking at certain points during this story.
person CeeCee
schedule February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the smut. Love Duo and Trowa flirting with each other at the reception. I love Zechs in pretty much anything, and he was so sweet in this. Great update.
person CeeCee
schedule January 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's neat to see Relena. I wonder if she'll run into any conflict with their father?

Sweet update.
person waterwolf
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ok I forgive you. it was worth the wait
person CeeCee
schedule December 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update this close to Christmas.

I like the cuteness between Trowa and Duo. Distracting him from the scary carnival ride made me chuckle, along with Wufei fussing about Quat's bony hip. I like when the boys fuss at each other. Bickering is fun to read and to write.

Well written smut. I can see Trowa being sensitive, then aggressive like that.

Hope you enjoyed your holiday.
schedule December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww, fluffy smut! Of course you're forgiven!!! Just don't let it happen again. ^_-
person Cee
schedule December 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Slam dunk. Good stuff. The mood swings and the license problem were well used.

Glad you updated. Poor Trowa, he's so sweet and he's been through so much.
person CeeCee
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I reviewed this chapter yet or not... I'm getting senile.

The visual image of Zechs picking up Heero and carrying him anywhere always makes me laugh for some reason, because when I see that move in any yaoi fics, I imagine two men dressed as a bride and groom, top hat, frilly dress and all, going over a threshold like in a sitcom. It's not a bad thing, mind you. I like light moments in any story, and it's still romantic, but the height difference between the two, with Heero being relatively short, just makes it cute. I read a ton of Wolverine/Gambit X-men fanfic, and Logan is usually the one carrying Remy, again slightly comical, with Logan being all of five-three and built like a tank, and Remy being a little over six feet and skinny, like Mutt and Jeff.

I like this chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next with that jerk, Stephens, and with Treize. And of course, bring on the smut. :)
person waterwolf
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That should make for and interesting wedding. ooooo Heero isn't going to be happy when he sees Trowa's face. Stevens better be a fast runner ::grins::. I can certainly understand getting caught up in reading fics.

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