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Oh, dude, I love your story!!!! It's well written, everyone's in character, the torture scenes are pure (delightfully) evil and inventive.

SPOILERS AHEAD

That worm scene, him hanging for hours from the roof, and that last rape part are definitely my favorites. I love how Vegeta manages to remain stoic most of the time, but he still sounds so vulnerable. And Frieza! So twisted, it actually made me gape here and there. Wonderfully done!

Hope you are still around <3 <3

Well...i dont want to be ridiculous but, you made me cry. Your awesome way to describe that too much pain, and suffering. It was special in the worm torture....i feel almost a heart attack...i whish stop read but i couldnt....seeing vegeta a victim like this was A pleasure but a sadnes too. You're great, really great writer. Why dont make a story where you talk about how this brave but traumatized vegeta makes love for the first time with bulma? You certainly could do a amazing work. I would like so much read you again sometime...

This story is so brutal, but I love it! It's also very believable and realistic which is what makes it so intriguing and immersing. As soon as the torture began, my chest would tighten and I felt like I could hardly breathe when I could only imagine what was going to happen next. The suspense alone in this story is quite torture-some and also lead every chapter to the imagination. Not only was it sick and original, but it was really creative and didn't hold back on the numerous possibilities of how Vegeta was going to suffer. This story barely has any yaoi in it and I don't care. It doesn't need it to make this story great, but it does make it that much more worse for Vegeta. I'm almost disappointed but at the same time grateful that Vegeta's torment has ended for now, but now I'm deeply curious as to what will happen in part two. Your writing is also flawless and your words are well put together and thought out. I am more than looking forward to more of your content and I hope Part 2 will be released soon. :)

Only on chapter 2...or one. Well, whatever. You are an excellent writer--flawless really. I am totally intrigued by this feeling of, well, affection Vegeta has for Frieza. In most Frieza/Vegeta fanfics, Vegeta usually has nothing but seething, wild hatred for his cruel master. But, I can see that this story is going to get much darker. Your style is realistic and raw. I love it. Off to read more!

You're very good at depicting the emotional abuse as well as the physical. Frieza being the only one to see Vegeta this way and no one believing that Frieza would actually do such a thing--so accurate.