rate_review Reviews

I honestly love this story, I am very impressed with it. I don't understand why it doesn't have more hits. I think that you capture the sadness of the Future Trunks' timeline very well and yet it's just a back drop, just like real life would be. We have emotions and thoughts that still guide us despite any danger or unsettled events from our past or our present, and in that, and many other ways, your story makes sense. I also like how you have put several parts in the story directly from the movie, and I wonder at what else you have in store. Not to mention that the flow is very nice, and your limes are fantastic. I also find it kind of nice that you put in there whether or not there will be anything sexually related and about where it is in the story. I have never seen that done before and although I think the story itself is WORTH reading and not just skipping through, I'm sure many people still do it, I find it to be a sort of quiet confidence on your part, and it is well placed. I'm interested in any other stories you may have written, and I hope that the lack of response on this website doesn't deter you from continuing to post.

Thank you for sharing, looking forward to more.

-TristaML