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by arvan

person IuvenesL
schedule August 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh wow! I haven't been on this site in a while, and I just stumbled on this story. It's kind of amazing that I even clicked on it; the title itself would have probably been a deterrent normally. I think it was the "can't log out" in the description that made me interested enough to click. I'm not a gamer at all, so it took me a few chapters to even figure out what was going on with the numbers and stuff. Your almost stream-of-consciousness style was also hard to get used to. But I'm glad I stuck with it; this is one of the most entertaining and original stories I've read in a long time.

I love all the little comic details like the vibrating 'sword' and the tentacle monster deflating into a squid when they beat it, and I especially love the overarching G/V love story. I only wish you were posting it on AO3 so I could subscribe; that is infinitely preferable to waiting impatiently for a fic that's slow to update. (Not complaining; I have one that's been on hold for years myself.) And I also wish I knew where to find the companion fics written by your friends; I feel like I missed something.

Anyway, thanks for writing this! I'm looking forward to the conclusion.

person Anonymous
schedule July 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Missed this story!  I'm happy to read the update and I hope to see another one soon! Now that Goku and Turles have confronted  each other on the situation im excited to see how it'll all come to a close.  I know there's a huge battle coming up,  it s crazy to think that these people and these things aren't really happening.  I wonder how it's going to play out. Don't feel rushed!  Update written you are happy with what you've written!  Looking forward to it!  

 

TristaML

person Kit-kit
schedule July 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Awesome chapter

person Robyn
schedule December 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have some catching up to do! Goku and 17's interaction in chapter 21 was fun to read.
person kit-kit
schedule October 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter
person kit-kit
schedule October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
person TristaML
schedule October 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! Goku made a move!! And I think vegeta finally understand s that turles is goku. I can't wait for the next chapter this one was great thanks for the update
person Dryu
schedule October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22 was the best thus far; the depth and emotion of it much appreciated, for the truth would have to eventually come out. You and your team do well incorporating characters in different, intriguing ways. This was an excellent chapter to a great story; I look forward to the next.
person TristaML
schedule July 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter about explaining things to them like why the game is so strange what with them not being able to log out and ask.. you made some good points and put detail to what I hadn't even considered. I will say it made the story more interesting and I'm also so constantly surprised at the way that you introduce random characters from dragonball z. I do wonder how you plan to set things straight the very idea is scary..being stuck in a video game with an artificially intelligent mad boss. Thanks for posting!

TristaML
person Robyn
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting update. I look forward to seeing how the real and created characters interact going forward. I hope they are able to maintain their solidarity until Goku and Vegeta are able to defeat the king and get out of the game!

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