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This latest chapter was excellently done. I was on the edge of my seat as the others were gut punched with the cruel truth that they are data in a game, yet sadly they all missed the large point the Sharpner told them, the AI has started to become more aware, meaning not everything they're going through is completely scripted. Hopefully this truth want break the team's spirit too badly. Looking forward to what is to come next.

Can't wait for the next chapter

That was an interesting turn of events. :D Goku and Vegeta have a small army now? LOL at Goku's hasty retreat. I wish their thoughts could have been better expressed after the kiss.
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Great chapter

Oooooo - Goku was so cute beating around the bush, but I just wanted him to spit it out! LOL No. 17 joining them just in time was awesome. Looking forward to seeing how the dynamic might change with a 5th party involved.

OMG!!!!! This is awesome! Loved the story line. Can't decide if I'm rooting for vegeta and goku or vegeta and turles.

I'm glad Tarble didn't go through with it! I also like that you had Goku forgive him almost immediately. It's in Goku's character to give everyone a 2nd chance (if not a 3rd, 4th and 5th. :P)

I'm glad they were able to work together to free Tarble's friends so the same leverage can't be used against him in the future. Also happy to see that Tarble will continue the journey. Although having Zarbon on the team might be interesting, I think you've built a well functioning team to write about and disrupting it now would be more of a distraction, I think.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Gasps! Why is Tarble going to poison them, what on earth did that note say, I'm on tenderhooks now!

Nice to see Vegeta enjoy the coupling this time and I think it was making Goku a little jealous was it not.

General Blue, gosh, a blast from the past I had forgotten about, but when I think about it this world would be perfect for him.

Eager for more now you left it on a cliff-hanger.

Oh man, it's been forever since I read DBZ fics. And this was AMAZING. . . so far. Is this going to continue? Please!

Seems I'm behind a couple of chapters. :P that's okay, means I get to read longer! I love the action in chapter 15. The fight with the monster was awesome; tentical monster and voyeurism made me laugh. The description of Goku and Turles getting pissed and fighting in sync made me want to actually see it on film - that'd be awesome!