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November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
:( I wish Tarble hadn't done that. I hope everyone will be okay. The second lemon was nice,really nice. The first one as - well, that General is a creepy sort of fellow.
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November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh no tarble is a bad guy
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September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loving how Goku is getting all protective of Vegeta's honor and doesn't like Turles interactions with him, now all we need is for him to get jealous :)
Oooh tentacles! Nasty. Poor Tarble and Vegeta. I wonder if Tarble was a virgin :(
Am I just being suspicious thinking something bad is in the powder Tarble just secreted away, and he had instructions with it? Could have just been a bag of sherbet but somehow I think it's something more sinister.
Excited to hear you are considering a sequel, will look forward to that.
Oooh tentacles! Nasty. Poor Tarble and Vegeta. I wonder if Tarble was a virgin :(
Am I just being suspicious thinking something bad is in the powder Tarble just secreted away, and he had instructions with it? Could have just been a bag of sherbet but somehow I think it's something more sinister.
Excited to hear you are considering a sequel, will look forward to that.
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September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lol that was a funny chapter, though I was surprised that the women wasn't Bulma, Chichi or Lunch.
Can't believe Turles was trying it on in the closet, obvious the lust is making his brain go all sqidgy! How long can Vegeta resist and wouldn't he prefer Goku?
Looking forward to the next instalment.
Can't believe Turles was trying it on in the closet, obvious the lust is making his brain go all sqidgy! How long can Vegeta resist and wouldn't he prefer Goku?
Looking forward to the next instalment.
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September 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so entertaining! I really enjoyed Goku's awkwardness! LOL
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September 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story as I love playing RPGs and often wondered how Goku and Vegeta would fair in some of them.
Hope you can update soon.
Hope you can update soon.
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August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The confrontation with Roshi was funny. Vegeta and Tarble are most certainly not suited to wear women's clothing, but you made it sound like they wore it pretty well. :P I'm curious as to who this enchantress is going to be and looking forward to finding out. :)
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July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ROFL - I forgot that Goku's sword was vibrating! That's so funny! Also, I found these titles amusing - 'Master Roshi, the immortal pervert' and mages have to see 'Elder Kai, the ancient voyeur. :P I like the fact Goku and Turles are getting at each other and that Goku doesn't know why he's letting Turles get to him.
Goku's vision was of starving children? That made me laugh, too. Too virtuous!
Goku's vision was of starving children? That made me laugh, too. Too virtuous!
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July 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I Love your story!!!! It's so much fun and original!! Where do you get your ideas for Crack? You're truly amazing and I love this group of four. Please continue writing this piece.
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June 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't expecting this update so soon, but glad to see you squeezed one in! :D The interaction between the four of them was priceless and I'm looking forward to seeing more. :D Thank you!