rate_review Reviews

Awwww come on! This is the second story you're takin a break from! D: Oh fine. I understand...haven't been able to even write a little bit for my stories lately. Hopefully you get some free time soon and just write like crazy...just don't abandon your stories...that happens too often. :/

Thanks for giving us a lemon before you took your break! :) I understand about RL and how it interferes with writing. *le sigh* Goku and Tarble's conversation had me squirming in embarrassment for Tarble - but it was humorous!

I love all the excitement in this chapter, and the fact they were SO close - and yet they still all didn't meet up yet! I so wanted to see that reunion! Ah well, later then. :)

LOL - someone sure is taking a risk! (Don't want to give it away)

Goku's newly found outfit had me cracking up! That's just fantastic. I liked the interaction between him and Tarble and that story he told about when he and Vegeta were roommates was very interesting. :P

I was kind of surprised this entire chapter dealt with Vegeta and Turles, but I liked the fact I didn't have to try and jump from one story line to another in the same chapter, so I'm OK your focus was on one set. :) It was fun watching Turles try to get at Vegeta and Vegeta declining, repeatedly.

Uh-oh! I believe the last character you introduced makes an excellent bad guy. :D Looking forward to the next chapter, regardless of what story line it focuses on. :)

I like this story alot, I'm not even much of a gamer but you make it easy to follow and the stat updates are so great. I can't help but wonder what you're going to do next and I like how you're adding unexpected characters from the DBZ world in unexpected ways! I look forward to reading the rest of this story very much.

Glad you started this back up again! :D I do like the idea, and don't mind reading it with all the level ups and such, even if I'm not a gamer.