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OOOO I like this, hurry with more! Its very interesting!

*la gasp* My day always gets a little brighter whenever I see a story of yours updated/uploaded. ^.^ This sounds quite interesting so far, although a little confusing, but it is the first chapter after all. *gasps again* I wonder, was it the idea of Planet Vegeta being enslaved that influenced you? :D When I was throwing some ideas out there, I was hoping one of them would catch your attention. ^^ After all, I know you can write it better than me. ;) I can't wait for more, I never can! x)

Your writing style is very unique, and one I thing I notice the most about your words or descriptions is that you're not afraid to be blunt. I've read fanfics that try to cover dark material or involve violent scenes, and just when I'm craving more, the writer edits the scene or makes it too vague. You take the reader into your story and actually put the words out there without worrying about what sensitive readers might think. Even with some past/present-voice issues, you're descriptive and always seem to have original, daring plots. I'm looking forward to reading more!