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OK, it's official. I want to F'in hunt you down, lock you it an F'in torture chamber, and watch you die from malnourishment as you continuously relive your worse fears until the pitiful end of your life. ...OK, let's forget that I just had a psychotic moment. All I wanna say is that it's 5:03(make that 5:04) in the morning, I have to be in to work at 10, and I've been up 1 unable to stop reading your story. I've read every yaoi fic I could find with a Trunks Goten pairing for the last 3-5 to five years probably, and I can thing of two, TWO!!! that were this captivating. I'm sure you have a life. Writing takes a loooong time. Your not all that secure in your own abilities. I don't give a crap. Unless you want a crazy guy hunting you down and tormenting your: FINISH THE DAMN STORY. *sigh* Man(wrong pronoun as I don't think I've ever run into Yaoi written by a guy) I'm going to regret writing this in the morning. Anyways, thank your for the UNFINSHED story. I'm now going to get my 2.5 hours sleep...very unsatisfied. ;)

This chapter moved the plot along quickly. Hoping that good news for Trunks will be ahead soon!

Is it just me or does anyone else want to grab them by their necks, then knock their heads together?

Well... I know it isn't easy to come out of the closet especially when your own society and the world seem to have a path for you to take and the 'guidelines' to follow in order to fit in with everyone else. I can't say I agree with their choice of 'poison' in order to cope but even I cannot tell whether Goten's or Trunks' is the lesser of the demon. Just hope they won't be too unnecessarily cruel on themselves and each other.

I like your take on this, though I would say even I'm frustrated with them; makes me want to whack their heads and throw them into the gravity room (I know that room can withstand their strength and they won't be able to blast their way out), lock it and not let them out until they've given each other the chance to talk and listen.

Hope you continue soon :)

Vegeta, Vegeta, Vegeta. What a walking contradiction! I think the people around Trunks are what makes him crazy. And how could Bulma not know? ChiChi, sure. But Bulma? Hmm. Interesting.

Ha, finally gokuxvegeta normalcy! Thanks for that.
...so is the dancer his new secretary? Hilarity ahead
Still loving this more with each chap!

Oh, yeah I kinda suspected that was Vegeta's intent, but your reminding me of that scene made laugh!
And Of course I really like this, these two are my favorite shipping and you're putting them in San interesting new drama. It totally dragged me in, especially when I check back to two chaps like this! Haha!!

Ok, so is everyone in denial here? Chichi cannot accept Goten's lifestyle, Gohan is most likely harboring feelings that can never be reciprocated, Vegeta...well, just Vegeta, and Goten isn't even living a life GOHAN would be happy with. Ayup, they are all a bit messed up. I think they all need to get back to some serious fighting. That gave them purpose. They need a bad guy!

I don't know if I want to strangle Trunks or Vegeta more?!?! And seriously, Bulma should be ok with gay people? That was the only part of the chapter that I thought was not how a character we know would react. Then again, it is your story so do as you want of course. And man, ChiChi is going to flip and leave is she ever found out about Goku. But honestly, I could see these two men hiding whatever they have for years and years because I think they do care for their wives, just on a different level.

Woo, two chaps at once, and both intense!! Poor Trunks, it kinda hurts to see how messed up he could have been if Vegeta hadn't turned as mostly-nice as in the anime... Princy just can't see his ways are caused most of his own son's problems, huh
Anyway still love this, and hoping you keep going!

Yay, Vegeta CAN be nice dad! I'm so glad you did that, it kinda bugs me when princy never lightens up
Poor Trunks, de-nile anyone?? Stuff the self-hating and talk it out calmly till you two boys understand already!
Short chapters but heavy progress, keeping at least me happy :]