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October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh , it's finish!
well, I love the caracterizacion. ( chichi... is cool)
you really get convince me of the love between Vegeta & Goten
and the plot is imaginative, different
The reading was worth of my time. Thanks
well, I love the caracterizacion. ( chichi... is cool)
you really get convince me of the love between Vegeta & Goten
and the plot is imaginative, different
The reading was worth of my time. Thanks
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October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe the indiference with this story . I can not believe this story some days ago.Glad to find that you updated and complete it.What I read:nicely written. I'm not into this pairing,but it worked for me here.I love your Vegeta, so sophisticated.your Goten is bold, but smart.Now , I continue reading