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Soo interesting can't wait to meet the mystery man who worked vegeta case. I feel so bad for kakarott...hopefully things will be fine him and vegeta.

Interesting twist from the beginning has this story.Really I didn't read it in long time...
I promise review more!;)
This is the only place where do you publish?
I found missing some your old works. .. is a pity
Really I like them

Wonderful sex scene! It was super good, I love that Vegeta taught Goku how to dirty talk. I'm also curious as to why Vegeta won't let Goku cum inside of him but that's kind of a small detail and it could always just be a personal preference of his.
It was interesting that Vegeta actually accepted Gohan's affections in the past. It was obviously before he got together with Goku but it's really interesting that they actually had an affair. I'm not sure if they took it all the way or just made out more but either way that's pretty crazy that Gohan wanted him so badly.
My heart broke when Vegeta said that he punched Raditz for all the times he said no but he didn't listen. I don't think Raditz fully realized that he was raping him. I guess after being on the other side of the situation he finally realized what he was doing was shitty. I wonder if someone had told Zarbon about it or if he had known about it for a long time and finally decided to do something about it. I guess it doesn't really matter haha

This is really coming together! This old lover Vegeta had definitely makes things interesting.
It's sad that they didn't get their tails back, I could really tell how upset Vegeta was by it. I think Goku would've liked to get his tail back too, even if he was kind of impartial to it.

All around great chapter!!

Wow. Can't wait for the next chapter. Who's the mystery guy? Will Vegeta ever slip up during mating?

Oh ho! The plot thickens! I'm really excited to see what crazy adventures they have in space and find out more about Vegeta :)

Awesome chapter. Love the insight into vegeta past

Love it! It's really interesting to see that Raditz actually cares about Vegeta here. It makes me wonder if he thinks that Vegeta wants it or if Raditz eventually stopped caring about him. I also really loved the interaction with Gohan and Vegeta in the second chapter, Vegeta was acting all parental which was adorable! I am curious about how this story is going to be set up though, will it always be short scenes from different places in time or will it lead into a chronological order with the Raditz and Vegeta scenes as flashbacks?

wow... this is . Utterly . Satisfactory.
Love It... although I predict much angst in the future ... hehe

Please please continue. Love it so far!