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Whoa, good story! I like all three instances that occur, and that ending! I did not see that coming. It was so sudden and brief, but it really did a good job at mustering a bunch of emotions! I like how the three separate parts of this story have such different moods. The Radditz and Vegeta interaction was unnerving. To think of Radditz's actions being so forceful, it really shows how dysfunctional the saiyajins in Frieza's army were. Yet Vegeta took it even though he was more powerful.

I really, really liked Goku's perspective on Vegeta. That simple description of Vegeta's appearance was so unique. It was innocent, as if a child was describing what Vegeta looks like. Goku is no poet and you really captured that.

Awesome work. Definitely adding it to my favorites!

Awesome chapter love to read more

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I love it!! Your story is so good and I can't wait to read more of it XD