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March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You can't see it, but I am crying tears of joy after reading this. One of THE BEST and HOTTEST fics I've read in what seems like forever. So, thank you for writing this and I would love to read more fics that you write. :)
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February 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love the phsicologic aspect of this story. rarely a fic looks for the real background behind the raping, the angry and the power issues.
Trunks is not totally evil here,the isolation of hiperbolyc chamber and the vegeta's attitude(and his own story,in his future) plays into this messing,I think.
Pervy but interesting view of their relationship.
Trunks is not totally evil here,the isolation of hiperbolyc chamber and the vegeta's attitude(and his own story,in his future) plays into this messing,I think.
Pervy but interesting view of their relationship.
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February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love all the Vegeta angst!!!
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February 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't spotted this little gem when you updated it.
interesting perspective ,Trunk here is being pretty borderline , but the behavior of Vegeta is intriguing ... I cannot wait to read more
interesting perspective ,Trunk here is being pretty borderline , but the behavior of Vegeta is intriguing ... I cannot wait to read more
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January 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Trunks as the villain. Interesting. At least, that's how I'm seeing him. It's unsettling to read about Mirai Trunks being so manipulative and downright abusive, however you have depicted an impressive, complex array of emotions here. The angst (oh the lovely angst) is truly gripping and I'm actually on the edge of my seat, waiting to see Trunks' dark character changes. You have managed to capture a lot of Vegeta, too, even though he has barely said a word to Trunks (except in his sleep).
Disturbing? Quite. But it's not too often we see this level of dark subject matter that is actually well-written. I like that the story is told from Trunks' view--it helps add to the mystery of Vegeta's character. I have to wonder what is going through his mind whenever he awakens with this sort of pain. And what will he do when he discovers what Trunks has been doing to him?? I like the ominous ending to this chapter. As usual, excellent writing and good job capturing the twisted mindset of the usually soft-spoken, well-mannered Trunks.
Disturbing? Quite. But it's not too often we see this level of dark subject matter that is actually well-written. I like that the story is told from Trunks' view--it helps add to the mystery of Vegeta's character. I have to wonder what is going through his mind whenever he awakens with this sort of pain. And what will he do when he discovers what Trunks has been doing to him?? I like the ominous ending to this chapter. As usual, excellent writing and good job capturing the twisted mindset of the usually soft-spoken, well-mannered Trunks.