rate_review Reviews

I don't have anything constructive to say, but I wanted to comment to let you know how much I've been enjoying this story! I'll be sad when it's done.

For a short chapter, it wasn't bad. I felt like there could have been a touch more information in it. Bulma stepped out of the tank in a better mood than I felt that she should have considering what happened. I'm going to assume that there will be more on that next chapter. One small suggestion though, when you switch between each char's POV, you may want to add a break between the parts of the chapter. Maybe a line of a couple asterisks, dashes or something so that the reader doesn't get lost. Bulma's POV was so small in this chapter that it wasn't too hard to figure it out but it can get confusing at times. Keep up the good work and don't worry, we all have to 'adult' now and then ;)

Ooo, Piccolo as the confidant! Unexpected move on our prince's part. I love the subtle mention of your Awakening story. That one was good also. I feel sorry for poor Bulma but at the same time curious as to what you have planned for her next. Keep up the brilliant work!

I just finished reading Flawed Perfection and was excited to start this sequel. I'm stoked! Flawed Perfection was a great story and I'm looking forward to seeing how Recovery goes. If the first chapter is any indication, good things are in store. :D