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You were right.  That was damned satisfying.  Moreplz!

Dad was buried two days ago with full Military honors.  I've had the stomach flu since then so it was only just now that I noticed the update. (i'm better now....24-ish hour bug type thing.)

When the day comes that you lose a parent....it will be damned hard...but I hope you have your family to see you through it, and ones sensitive enough to know when you need time alone to process it, too.

I hope you do have planned to write Vegeta's next pregnancy at some point.  He really needs to share that experience with Goku.  Maybe another daughter in the mix as well?  (Honestly, in the anime I can't wait for Bra to be born.  You saw those scenes, I'm sure, of Vegeta trainaing in the gravity room, determined to protect his family.  He can't stand of a timeline where his Bulma was murdered.  The birth of a daughter now means he'll be completely wrapped around her little fingers.)

I hope I see another update fairly soon!  I need the distraction.  Dad died two days ago.  I can't wait to see Freiza get what he so royally deserves....and for, hopefully, Vegeta to realize some things about himself.

When this site changed all that a while back I had to jump through hoops just to login.

Anyways, this last chapter sent chills up my spine and made me feel dirty, because Freiza, no matter whether or not he is truly male or (I've seen speculated) his species is asexual...well, Freiza, sexual or not, is a sick, sick bastard either way.

You are right.  I felt very much Vegeta should have been the one to completely off Freiza.  He deserved it.  And (spoiler alert if you haven't seen Super 52 yet), going by how absolutely pissed off he is in the training room and why, because Black killed Bulma in Future Trunks's timeline, I honestly think he ought to be the one to take Black down.  Threats to his family make Vegeta boil, and work with a single goal-to eliminate that threat.

Wow; they upgraded our ability to review!  (It's about time...)

This entire chapter made me feel very heartsick.  I hope Freiza gets what he deserves (and more; make Karma an utter bitch to him!), but I also hope Vegeta can overcome more of his demons.

I can't wait for the next chapter....hopefully soon.

I really like the complex story-line you have with Beerus's involvement with the saiyajins and Frieza. I like Beerus in the show, but damn I hate him in your story. He's just...creepy. Ugh. And I think I've said this before, but I love Whis and Vegeta. I definitely think that they have a unique closeness in the show, too. But man, I am so anxious to see what happens to Vegeta, especially if he becomes pregnant again! Great writing. And I like that you update so fast.

What Whis didn't tell Vegeta that keeping a corporeal body means that each time Vegeta goes into heat, Whis has to suffer a fantastic case of blue balls as well due to how Vegeta's scent affects him.

You still have plans to update in the near future? I hope you haven't given up entirely on this...

Wow, I haven't reviewed this in a long time, sorry about that! Well you've got some fun twists and interesting saiyan back story going on here. I like the idea that Beerus is the reason for the saiyan's aggression. Makes sense for the saiyans in universe six to be fighters of justice while seven's were mercenaries. Like Six is what they'd have been without Beeru's interference. The idea of Goku as a god of destruction is a little disturbing. I mean 'all' of his friends (even Bulma fired a bunch of bullets at him the first time they met) were bad and tried to kill him at one point and he managed to bring out the good in them. He knows that people can change given the chance, so the thought of him murdering whole planets just seems like it would go against his principles. I'm hoping you're going to plot twist that somehow, maybe something to do with all the hints you've given about Whis??? At least is seems like you've been hinting at something big with him. Still very much intrigued with where you're going with this. Thanks for the read b-chan

Very interesting last few chapters. Sorry to hear about the broken bones. A lot has certainly happened, and it's happening fast. I still can't quite figure out what Beerus wants from them, but I like what you've done with the story line. I can see that you have more coming up with Gohan and obviously with Whis, too! Exciting! I will say I like that you've made Whis and Vegeta understand one another and form a sort of friendship, I never thought much about Whis in that regard, I didn't realize that he wasn't a god himself, and in that respect I didn't think he had feelings akin to mortals, but it works well. I think Vegeta is the type of person who really IS a "good" man and would be a good friend, but people don't give him the chance... So curious to see what happens next! TristaML

*Jaw drops* Oh...my...god. That's just amazing. I have no other words right now. Just...more, please!!! PS, my dad survived triple bypass. Thanks for the well-wishes. Your update came just in time. I could freely concentrate on it again. Last time my heart was really heavy and it was hard. Say, maybe you could answer a question, either in-story or as a reply...could a daughter pass on that male-childbearer gene as well, to a male child? Since Vegeta has that gene, any of their sons could have it too. It's an interesting thought. I haven't done it in years, but long ago I used to wonder what a sister of Vegeta's would have been like. (Nothing too fancy..just her and Vegeta beating the hell out of each other and teasing each other like siblings do.) The possibility of a girl passing on the gene as well, and mention of Goku and Vegeta's daughter, suddenly reminded me of that old idea. I don't plan to write DBZ fanfics, but that doesn't mean I don't wonder about things...especially the weird stuff. (I remember trying to puzzle out Piccolo's people and how the hell they procreate because so much didn't make sense to me...but that's another story. Yes, I'm really weird.)