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Damn Vegeta is really good at giving oral! And I really like how Vegeta is slowly starting to see how things like that can be pleasurable and good. I also really liked how you described Vegeta's state of mind. Him having panic attacks, the marks he made from scrubbing his skin to hard, and how he had everything as 'part of the drill' were nice to see, it makes him feel more real because anyone that has been through what he has will have these things. A lot of writers like to have Vegeta mate with Goku and have all of his troubles just magically vanish so it's nice to see him written as an actual person with complex thoughts and emotions. I also liked how Whis has grown attached to Vegeta and Goku and wants to help Vegeta control when he can conceive, he seems like a good parental figure for them to turn to when they need help. The part with Vegeta, Goten, Trunks, and the babies playing together was so sweet I could hardly bare it.

I love Whis. I love him. And I love that he is in this story!!! Ahhh! Anyway, excellent chapter. I like how everyone is pretty accepting of the little twins and Goku and Vegeta's special relationship. It's the DBZ world, so they're just kind of like 'whatev.' I am super interested to see how Beerus and Vegeta interact. As we see in DragonBall Super, Beerus is pretty disrespectful toward Vegeta and demanding of him. I have a feeling, with your skill of writing, things may not go well for the prince when it comes to interacting with the God of Destruction. Also, yay for Bulma! I love that she is supportive. I love that she and Vegeta still very much care for each other. Now onto Videl's part of the story. What are the other DBZ guys going to find out? I hope that Videl doesn't tell a bunch of lies that make everyone turn against Vegeta! Goku protect him!

Well that was an evil cliff hanger. Just what did Gohan tell her to make her mad at Vegeta? Are you still being evil Gohan or just a coward unable to confess the truth to your wife (which makes sense because just 'how' do you tell your wife you became evil and cheated on her with a reluctant Vegeta? And surprise we have kids together. Videl would totally beat the snot out of him.) Like how you explained Whis's, that something 'new' was what made life worth living. Goku’s request of Whis was rather interesting, just how would you… ‘train’ someone not to conceive? Now Vegeta don’t Ovate understand…. (sweat drop). Would think asking Bulma to make a super saiyan birth control pill would be easier, potentially less embarrassing, but not nearly as entertaining. Rather curious what Whis is going to do. Once again thanks for the read. Looking forward to what you have installed for us next. Ja ne b-chan

Can't wait till next chapter :)!

Wow, it's been such a long time since I visited aff.net. The site even changed name. Hehehe. I'm so happy to have read this fic, because now I know the fandom isn't dead yet, despite lot's of good talented writers disapearing on us. So I've read your answer to one of your reviwers and I too know (it's a fact) that Goku is much smarter than what he likes to show. It's proven in those chapters before cell games, it's proven in the way he fought all his adversaries in the original DB series, it was proven in the chapters right before arriving in namek and fighting freeza. He's just not too much interested in the things that seem important to civilized people, he doesn't feel the need to. Thanks for sharing this fic. And thanks for hearing me talk about my favourite character. Hehehe, you didn't really need to. Hugs.

Intense! Man, poor Vegeta! He has been through hell! Now that Gohan's human side is back in control, I wonder if he'll be able to ever forgive himself for what he has done. He must still feel some desire for Vegeta, but will he fall back into that crazed lust or will he just feel disgust in himself. I love angsty Vegeta. I really do. Even when he's powerless and helpless and crying like he is in this last chapter, I just love him. I'm up-to-date with all the Dragon ball Super stuff. I think it would be interesting to include some of the new characters somehow! Great stuff!

Hi B here Sorry I didn’t write this review sooner, both my sister-in-laws had babies this month so I’ve been crazy busy. Well we got our conclusion with evil Gohan, seriously thought you were going to have to kill him there. So if I understand this correctly it’s the awakening of his saiyan side that made him so aggressive or more exactly the fact the he never took steps to embrace and control it, so once it was forcefully brought to the surface he wanted to prove himself the strongest alpha male, or something like that; plus a whole lot of pent up feelings for both his father and Vegeta. It was Kind of sad that you made him want to break Vegeta when it appears he did have some feelings for the older man before all this happen. I mean you wrote places where he was acting all nice and caring telling Vegeta he’d be a good mate only to have Vegeta discover it was all lies. You really made him evil, evil till the end there. Felt a little sorry for him that he didn’t have the courage to admit his attraction to Vegeta when he was younger; poor nerd Gohan if he didn’t need therapy before he sure does now. Wondering if Piccolo will be willing to help him? I mean Piccolo is a father figure to him, plus he didn’t see Gohan acting like a megalomaniac; knows all the details, but didn’t see any of it himself. But then, Piccolo has the twin girls so I don’t know if Piccolo’s willing to risk them to help Gohan or if Gohan will be able to go near them without guilt or maybe even mental attacks from the pair. You did say attacking was easier then defending. That punishment might indeed be a lot harsher then it first seems. Anyway the whole Gohan thing was nicely tied up. Still waiting for Goku and Vegeta to talk, they seriously have some things that need to be addressed. You did state that Goku was mad when he talked to Bulma and yes I get your point about helping people first then pointing out how stupid it was that they ended up in such a situation. I suppose I’m just more on Bulma’s boat pointing out what a ‘proud, stubborn asshole’ he can be. I’m sure it will be an interesting conversation to say the least. Wondering what Goku’s response to seeing the kids will be, if he’ll want to take them from their foster parents? Personally think he won’t be able to handle so many kids. Wondering if he’ll want to put a stop to the whole repopulate project? As always still very curious where you’re going with this. Thanks for the read, may your muse be good to you. Ja ne b-chan P.S. yah I do a lot of Dragon scans, unfortunately the sections down for the time being, but hopefully not for good.

More beautifully written chapters! I liked how Vegeta got his revenge in a way, and how Goku presented Gohan to him to do what he wanted with him. Gohan is lucky to be alive but his punishment is going to eat at him forever. That and Gohan has soiled just about all of his relationships with everyone. Things are probably going to be really hard for a lot of the characters now, especially Vegeta and Goku. Vegeta will need time to heal mentally and physically, even with Goku's help he'll most likely still have some issues from all of this. That kind of torment doesn't really disappear but at least Goku will be with him to help now, haha and Piccolo is a good friend/support system too. I loved how you captured Piccolo's sass btw, I like thinking of Vegeta and Piccolo as sarcastic sassy besties when things aren't as serious hahaha. As for the authors note I've seen Resurrection ‘F’ and most of Dragon Ball Super so you wouldn't need to do any introductions or rehashings for me at least. Overall I loved how you ripped my heart out with these chapters and I'm excited to see what other amazing stuff you have in store!

Alas, I think the day has finally come when I have become an old woman :P I'm not a huge fan of the new DBZ movies or the continuation of the series. It's perfectly fine if others do like them, but I'm starting to feel like my parents back in the day when they said they did not understand what my fascination was with Dragon Ball or Dragon Ball Z. So if you wanted to include an explanation of the new characters, I would be most appreciative because I would not know half of them

Firstly, in an answer to your question, I think it's always a good idea to have some sort of brief explanation of the new characters, even though they may be well known, not only because some of your readers may not know them, but because it'll flow into the story easier. Now, as for what I said last time, I hope you didn't take me harshly. I have noticed a growth in the story, even as far as the "mushy stuff." You've done an excellent job in working with the characters and explaining so fully what's really going on. I saw a lot more depth in all of them in these last chapters. I can't believe I missed all these updates, it takes me a while to catch up sometimes. "Were they human, it might have been flowers and candy, but they were made of harder stuff." I loved that. It used a very human description to explain their very un-human nature, and what's better is that there was no explanation given, because we lack the understanding of it to do it justice. That's partially why I enjoy the show so much and what makes this fanfiction possible. It's realistic in a weird kind of way to me. I am more curious now to know what'll happen than I have been before. I actually thought for a moment that this chapter might be wrapping it up, but I'm glad it's not, I would have been disappointed. I want to point out to that I liked how you used Goku's fighting intellect in this most recent chapter. (I like stories that keep the characters in character) He has a dual personality, in my opinion, and you showed that a little bit. He does have intelligence that goes deeper than "I feel," and your explanation of why he let Gohan remember was brilliant. Thank you so much for writing, TristaML