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by ctsama

schedule December 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Amazing as always!!!  Moreplz!!!

schedule November 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hoping for a new chapter soon!

schedule November 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You seem to be doing "everything but" with regards to Gohan and Vegeta at this point.  XD


Waiting for more!

schedule November 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hoping for more soon!  *Wave wave*

schedule November 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am sick yet again, this time with tonsilitis/ear infection, so I didn't notice this for a while.

I swear I am not lying to you.  I get sick a lot because the inhaled steriods I have to use for asthma make me VERY susceptible to anything that goes around, AND my job brings me into contact with several hundred people on a daily basis.

I did read it, and I can't wait for more....so give me more, please!  :)

schedule October 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Here and waiting for more!!!!

schedule October 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I completely forgot I hadn't commented on this chapter!  When I read it I was heading out the door to work, so that fact had slipped my mind.

In short, very good chapter!  Frost:  An asshole, any way you see it.

I do have a thought about Vegeta, but do you want to hear it is my question.

schedule October 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh, after a re-read (when I was less in a hurry), I wanted to comment and ask about this:  Whis's behavior in this chapter.  His emotions about Vegeta are becoming increasingly pronounced.  I don't know what else to say about it, besides it was emotional to read (also read:  enjoyable).  I suppose when he hasn't let himself feel anything for so, so long, to finally be able to feel again; it is pretty hard to contain.

person Wemyss
schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great saga! Loving every chapter.

schedule October 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hoping to see more soon!  :)

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