Amazing, as usual. I'd just about given up on you. More plz!
Damn it, just as I was going to bed...just to see this update and get all hot and bothered.
Very good job, but I do hope you intend to, at some point in the VERY near future, write a complete scene of this sort!!! You weren't punishing me for nagging, were you? << >>
I liked how overall gentle Vegeta was...he didn't try anything rough. Goku hasn't had any sort of...activity...with that part yet, and you gotta go easy there at first.
If Vegeta's conscious when they do it, I hope he won't worry too much. Sure as hell worried a lot with Bulma.
"High in protein."
Bahahahaha!!!!
Yes, I most certainly saw the chapter. More, please!!!
Have another 'push' because I am waiting for...anything. << >>
How frequent are your updates to this going to be?
I seem to be having some trouble leaving a review, and getting exasperated leaving my thoughts only to have this website burp them up.
Long story short: Come out of hiding. You write top-quality stuff I could not begin to compare my own with. More please!
Hey, I have no problem believing that those two met on Vegeta-sei before! This is easy enough to believe. These two chapters were amazing! When it comes to fate, I'm a believer in middle ground no matter what the rules of the DBZ universe are...it's always possible to change things.
Sort of reminds me of my old idea of Vegeta having a sister...I always felt it made King Vegeta a hypocrite for not being quite as hard on his daughter as he was his son, but then again, she was slightly younger. Tarble would have been the middle child.
As for luck, yes, I've had a run of the bad stuff lately. Bronchitis, then hand injury, and this past week, strep throat. I'm cured of that and can mostly use my hand again, so I hope my luck changes soon.
Hopefully a run of good luck for you means not breaking your computer again. ;)
PS, one's a girl! Yay!!!
Again, sorry for the late review, but typing is still rather painful. (Lost my balance and fell; heard a snap. Fingers not broken, but damage is bad. Narrowly avoided surgery. Fingers are slowly healing though.)
I have a very difficult time believing that Vegeta can avoid looking upwards at all times. Seems to me that Beerus's planet has a LOT of worlds surroundng it. It's a minor detail. so feel free to ignore it.
This chapter actually triggered a dream in me a few days back about some ninja father who was Saiyan and didn't know it. Married and had a daughter. Lived in some fishing village. Beating off a Yakuza mob boss while going Oozaru and stomping the crap out of him. Weird thing was, no tail. The only thing about the dream that seemed Dragon Ball in nature was the father and daughter. Otherwise, it was like a totally different anime. Pretty weird.
PS, as usual, more please! Loving these as well as the main story!