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for Uncertainty and Pride

by TristaML

schedule May 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm sad it's over, but it's absolutely beautiful from start to finish. You did an amazing job, I love your writing. I'm still processing all of the feels that gave me, so I'm just going to go open a gallon of ice cream now. 

person Kit-kit
schedule May 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just love reading a happy ending.

person Kit-kit
schedule May 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Awesome chapter...the story seems to be coming to a end 

schedule May 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You never fail to leave me full of emotions with each chapter. My chest is all fluttery right now, everything is starting to work out, but at the same time I can't help but wish Bardock was still here. The relationship between Raditz and Vegeta is one of my favorite parts of this story, too.

Amazing job, as always. ^_^

person ctsama
schedule April 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am absolutely loving this story.  Your plots are so well thought out!  I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.  Come on Vegeta, you can do it!  :D

person Kit-kit
schedule April 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Things are moving very quickly...i wonder where vegeta went off to

schedule April 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Bardock, no!! T.T

Oh Lords, we're in the thick of it now... Update as often as you like, I am SO ready! I'm glad you love your work, you should be proud of what you've made. 

person Kit-kit
schedule March 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm finally all caught up...goodness so much drama is happening. I'm happy kakarott and vegetables are together but I know it a tentative relationship...anything can cause them to split 

schedule March 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Finally, that was satisfying to see! (Secretly hoping to see them switch it up ;) ) They still have a long way to go, though. It was nice to see a break in Vegeta's walls, small though it was. Seeing him finally take Bardock's advice at the end there had to be my favorite part. That, and the scene between Bardock and Kakarot.

person Kit-kit
schedule March 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Awesome chapter..I have 6 more chapters to read before I'm all caught..but having kakarott be vegeta sparing partner will bring them closer. 

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