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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Delightful. While I wish Goten had gone with Trunks [soully so Gotenks could be in later chapters], I loved your story. It was entertaining and just confusing enough to make a girl want to come back to find out more.
I was a little confused on the couples, which will most definatly come given the nature of this site, but as long as it doesn't verge on yoai or yuri, I know I'll enjoy whichever way you put.
Trunks was expertly writen and I hope he'll be a major palyer in the next chapter [which will be soon, right?]
I was a little confused on the couples, which will most definatly come given the nature of this site, but as long as it doesn't verge on yoai or yuri, I know I'll enjoy whichever way you put.
Trunks was expertly writen and I hope he'll be a major palyer in the next chapter [which will be soon, right?]