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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally! sorry I didn;t review last time. I almost gave up on this fic. \'Early Interaction\' please continue!
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When are you planning on updating?
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August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man, that was awesome! I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Please continue! I love your discription! I await your next upload with only my word of return. Farewell; abayo.
*turns into a pile of black sand*
*turns into a pile of black sand*
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is good so far ^^ The lemon parts are great and the plot is interesting. Can\'t wait to read more!
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July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was...um...*blushes* Wow. I really don\'t know what to say. The scenes from Piccolo\'s POV didn\'t do much for me, but the girl was pretty hot. *sheepish smile*
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok its good. I give it an 8 out of 10. The story is very suspenseful for only the first chapter, like one of the fics(Dark Blue Child) that u made. I hope it continues because I haven\'t seen any more chapters of it latey. *hint* Hurry up and continue it. And to me nothing can beat DBC(Dark Blue Child) which u should also finish. But this is still a good fic.
*Finish!
*Finish!
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so good pleas write the next soonsoon.
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really well written. Especially the lemony parts of the fic. If the ending to chapter one looks that good, hopefully the end of this fic will be even betta. Continue!