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July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cries big tears of unfathomable emotion* Bravo! *claps wildly* Bravo! ^_^
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June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was amasing, beautiful even, *Crying* *sniff* soo good, you write soo well, it pitys my own work, well i have to go write my next chap. check out my flics if you get a chance i would lov any comments you give ^_^~
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June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
geez, that was so good. *geez*
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June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, super ending to a super fic!!! So that asshole was one of her co-workers...hehehe, he won\'t be getting a paycheck anymore :D. I absolutely loved this fic. So erotic and everyone was so IC. Graet job!!
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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have never read a DBZ fic where Vegeta was portrayed better than this. Your style of writing, and grasp of Vegetas psychology are so excellant they send chills up my spine! I always visualize what I am reading when the writing is good, and since this story was more than good -it was INCREDIBLY WONDERFUL- it will haunt my mind for a long time. I hope to read more from you. Please never stop writing!
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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was finally able to read chap #6 and just loved it. I like the way you made Veggie this time around. He showed her he cared by how he treated her not by saying it. The lemon was yummy too :D.
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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh man!! That was so hot!! Super build-up to a great lemon ^_~. Now is that Yamcha at the end or maybe one of Bulma\'s co-workers? I don\'t think the idiot\'s aware of the danger he\'ll find himself in if he messes with Veggie\'s woman. Can\'t wait for your next update :D.
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi this is really getting good please e-mail me when u update this ok thanx...Keep up the great stories.
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June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your fic. It is truly awesome. It was a great change to see Bulma the one caught in the act instead of Yamacha and switching from Bulma\'s to Vegeta\'s POV is a wonderful way to move the storyline along. And the lemons....what can I say, fabulous is an understatement.
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I loved it, hot, hot hot.I love your take on Vegeta. If you have a update list please, please add me. Thank you for a great read.
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