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June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautiful, passionate and compelling fanfiction. I love how you portray Vegeta. Dark, mysterious and protective. It makes me shiver.
Wonderful writing. I hope there\'s more soon.
Wonderful writing. I hope there\'s more soon.
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June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know that scene where Bulma\'s mouth is in an \'O\' shape and nothing comes out? Well, that\'s how I feel after reading this fic... It\'s just one slamming erotic scene after another. Jeez, and I\'m supposed to walk around in public after reading this? :(
Absolutely fantastic!
Absolutely fantastic!
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June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ, that was so intense! Every chap was intense O_O. Excellent. Brilliantly written. Veggie was so IC that I wanted to punch him in the face. Bulma was somewhat weak, but it had to be that way to make the story work. Fantastic lemons! I can\'t say enough about this fic. Great job girl!!! :D.
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June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That\'s about all I can say right now. This was unbelievable. I can\'t even leave a worthwhile review, it was so good!! *drooling*
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June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have read both your stories and I think they are exelent examples of erotic work please write more soon.
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is the only vegeta/bulma get together story i have ever read that stays in character. this story seems to be the most legit way that they got together. good job. it\'s original and not dumb like the others. WHAO! wr! write more write more WRITE MORE!
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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far! Please keep writing
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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Another of my favorites :D Hope to see more Vegeta-y goodness =^_^=