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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So when is that next chapter coming up? I wanna know what happens next please!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,love the story so far but now I\'m really anxious for an ending here. I hope you haven\'t given up on this story because of lack of reviews. Anyways I hope you do decide to update this story one day since it\'s so well written.
Angelwarrior1
Angelwarrior1
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE your writing style, I think it fits with this storyline very well.
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loved the second chapter...kinda violent...but fits the people, enjoyed, third chapter...threw me a little. Writing style is very good
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to see where this goes in chapter six...did I tell you this story is great? It is
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very very good writing. plot is very good also along with the detail! please update soon
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is so good! more soon please!
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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very cool story, very in character. It neither makes Bulma out to be whiny and submissive and Vegeta an utter irredeemable jerk, nor Bulma an overbearing harpy and Vegeta just a hunk of Saiyan fudge under her rule. I look forward to the continuation, as you seem to know the characters very well.