rate_review Reviews

Isn't this a finished story on ff.net? A good P/Gh, sad, but good...

I know one thing that was funny. The HORRENDOUS grammar in this fic! Good god, do you know how to spell?! How old are you?! When you leave grade school, come back, at least when you learn to spell. Geez man, I've never seen spelling more atrocious. You had a good idea, but please, get someone to beta for you, or something, just PLEASE don't write another one without reading a dictionary, or going to school first. Sorry man, somebody had to say it.