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for Father\'s Day

by AMCM

person crazy monkey bitch
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how the hell do ya end a story withoput finishing it you need to make them at least get to earth!!!
person Chicharu
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, lovely chapters! Is this the end? I hope not. I hope you will write more chapters to this story! Looking forward to the next chapter or update or whatever :p x Chicharu
person vegetachik7
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is...AMAZING! I loved it. I loved how you portrayed Goku and Vegeta's relationship. It was perfect. Wow, excellent, good stuff, great story.
person aarika
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow..too cool. hope you continue the story. i would really like to see how cauli and lettice adjust to earth.
person 1234
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi I hope you continue with this story it\'s quite good. Thought it did take a while for me to warm to it. I have to admit it did frustrate me a bit the way Chi Chi carries herself in the story but I guess you\'re holding true to her character. But besides that it\'s a very original story, to it is any way.

Any who like I mentioned before, I hope you\'ll update soon. See ya Mo :)
person Crystal
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like your story. It is very good and original. Please update soon.

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