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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your first attempt at this stuff? Wow... I can\'t believe it.
I always hate the tamed Vegeta they seem to have so this was such a refreshing occurrence.
Your writing was witty and very interesting to read. The characterization was also wonderful. \"This was better than food, well almost.\" That line was such a stroke of genious that I was almost laughing.
All in all this was a wonderful fic and I sincerely hope that it won\'t remain your last of its kind.
I always hate the tamed Vegeta they seem to have so this was such a refreshing occurrence.
Your writing was witty and very interesting to read. The characterization was also wonderful. \"This was better than food, well almost.\" That line was such a stroke of genious that I was almost laughing.
All in all this was a wonderful fic and I sincerely hope that it won\'t remain your last of its kind.
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was an amazing fic! But in the beginning, I was discouraged by the \'G/V\', for I am a lover for VxG. :P But, I read on and I\'m VERY glad I did! Oh... those seme!Vegetas are soooo drool-worthy! And uke!Goku, all I have to say is: mwuhahahahaha.
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahah! That ending was pricelss! Vegeta screwed him so good he passed out! Man you are a talented writer, I\'ve enjoyed everything of yours I\'ve read! Please more!
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*YES!* Finally, someone put Vegeta in a position of power. I can\'t tell you how relieved I am; every single Goku/Vegeta fic I\'ve ever read has Vegeta written in as uke. It gets annoying. Very annoying. ^__^ Nicely written! Very well-done.