rate_review Reviews

I Liked the first two chapters (except foe coe comment of Meirain on Wufei, they seemed a little odd) but I have to say that I re don don\'t like the third chapter. I don\'t know, maybe it because I never care for Meiran. I don\'t know, but it just that...she had a gay-radar? And she seem very forward too. Maybe it just because I could never do that (been forward that it) or because of Meiran but I don\'t really like chapter three. But I like the first two.

Anyways this is just my opinion and I think I am a littit bit biased, so it worth what it worth.

Keep writing, curious to know how it will go!

I really like the direction of this fic. So please update soon!! Is there any possibility you could emailwhenwhen you do update?

All the characters are introduced. I can\'t wait to read how Heero & Wufei get together!

Obviously you have the pairings spelled neatly out for the reader to observe - just watch your passive/active tense, that whole \"he was doing\" vs. \"he did\"-thing can be misleading in here. Also, Wufei\'s social set-up is something very identifiable - obviously, many people resent a person for being different, so to say, not to mention so different as being gay. I\'m glad that the characters - Heero in particular - don\'t react to things as extremely as they do in the series. Obviously, they\'re teenage guys going to school here, not Gundam pilots, but there would be a difference in behavior between the two and the story demonstrates that. You\'ve already involved Zechs and made him the lover of a secondary character, which is an interesting twist (he offers so many possibilities as he must be, with or without the experiences he had during the war in the series, a complex person), who knows what kind of instrument he\'ll turn out to be. ^_^ I liked this, it\'s cute with lots of possibilities - wishing you smooth sailing on the next part, -Becca-W

LoL... I really want to review, because this has so many possibilities and seems so good.... BUT what is there to review on? There isn\'t enough to adequately except people to respond! ^-^ please post a few more chapters **ahemNOWahem** and we shall see about reviews! ^-~ Lets hope the rest is as good as it seems, or that this isn\'t gonna fade into the archive without any additions.