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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job, loved it. I like the way you portrayed the couples insecurities. Very good definately a 10.
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice job. Well done portrayal of Chichi. Since she\'s usually protrayed as the bossy, screaming bitch, this is a good change. I love this couple and think no other couple fits as well (beside B/V) in the DBZ universe.
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it was great... loved it... can\'t wait to read more!
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July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that was one of the best stories I\'ve ever read it was so touching and spicy too ! ^.~
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July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Y\'know, I\'ve always hated Chi Chi, but this made me feel a bit more tender toward her. How would I feel if my husband took off for years at a time? I guess much the same way she does! Very well written and articulate. Nice lemon. Not PWP at all — very appropriate.