rate_review Reviews

It was real good, you should write a bulma and vegita fic like this.

Wow....that was a great story.....just...amazing...

Well, write...some more stories...I\'ll be looking out for more stuff done by you...

Oh please DO imagine Bardock getting laid some more! This was very well written, with a good grasp of character as well as sex. (BTW, you have no idea how much I appreciate reading fanfic by someone who actually PASSED high school English. The total lack of bad spelling,se gse grammar, and typos was positively orgasmic!)

I\'m very much looking forward to more of your work. Keep writing! :)