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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your story is fantastic! I really hope you update very soooon!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hm, don\'t really know what to say.. just that you should really hurry up with the next chapter.. and that you\'re a bitch for putting such a strong spell on me :P
For the next couple of days I will only be able to think about your fic, and check every hour if you\'ve updated yet.. But it\'ll be worth it when you do :)
So hurry hurry hurry please :) hophop, stop reading me review, start writing the next chapter
Thanks
For the next couple of days I will only be able to think about your fic, and check every hour if you\'ve updated yet.. But it\'ll be worth it when you do :)
So hurry hurry hurry please :) hophop, stop reading me review, start writing the next chapter
Thanks
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hello i just want to say that your story is amazing i read it entirely all in one time i just couln\'t stop myself. i can\'t wait for the next chapter...i hope you update often
anyway i wish you a lot more imagination
see you soon
anyway i wish you a lot more imagination
see you soon
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
!!!keep up the great work !!! i can\'t wait to read the next chapter............please update soon
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September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! An update. I\'m so happy you updated. It has made my day. Looks like Bluma is in a bind. What will she do know that Vegeta is home? Will he find out about Trunks or her relationship with Radtiz? Will her father be present? I am really looking forward to reading what will happen next. Please update ASAP!!!
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is great!! A bunch of love triangles going on. :) This last chapter was really good. Trunks is born! Yeah! I wonder if Vegeta will ever know that he has a son and heir. Looking forward to reading what will happen next. Please keep them coming and soon!!!
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No Bulma! Not with raditz! Vegeta needs you! Okay, now that I got that out of the way, please, please, please update soon!
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
tell me more i really wont 2 read the rest of this story.dont let bulma fall for raddiz ang i wont vegeta 2 c her again and acsept her/his dad treats her like a daughter so he wont b mad if he found out i hope. anyway thats what i think i mean reading bulma and vegetas sex seen turnd me on so much{ya gotta luv a good sex seen}if only men where that pleasing in bed.
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you\'ve got 2 finish this story...get chapters 5,6,7,8,9,etc... up now! great writing. u need an editor or spellcheck, but damn good story involving great characters.give me 1/2 of chapter 5 by july 26th...that\'s 2003! thanx janellab
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic so far!!! Woa! Please Write more soon