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April 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More soon please! It\'s getting really good.
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April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heero\'s really OOC. Still at least he didn\'t let Duo have his wicked way with him ::snort::
update soon!
update soon!
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April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More, More, more!!! I need more!!! I love it so much, just let Dou stop being so masterly. Please also make everyone who is good happy. I need them all to be happy. Oh yes. Poor preggy Quatre. Make preggy Q happy, too.
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April 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
I just wanted to review this as I\'ve been enjoying it so much. I read it first somewhere else but the site only had up to chapter 14....what a treat when I find it here with so many more chapters. LOL kid in a candy store seriously.
Your fic is really well thought out, I especially love the whole Duo/Heero plotline. They\'re definitely my favourite characters and the way you\'ve written their relationship is wonderful. So many times you find it\'s Duo who\'s the slave and Heero the cruel overbearing Lord. This is a really refreshing change from that, it\'s ironic that Hilde has been replaced by Heero because she got pregnant. I dread to think what\'s going to happen in the future when the curse on Heero rears it\'s ugly head.
The other plotlines are fantastic too, in fact the whole fic is incredible in my opinion. Really well thought out and it\'s presented well. No overly flowery language lol. It\'s simple, to the point, and it pulls you into the scene wonderfully. Keep it up. I\'m waiting for the next chapter with bated breath.
Ja ne, Natea.
I just wanted to review this as I\'ve been enjoying it so much. I read it first somewhere else but the site only had up to chapter 14....what a treat when I find it here with so many more chapters. LOL kid in a candy store seriously.
Your fic is really well thought out, I especially love the whole Duo/Heero plotline. They\'re definitely my favourite characters and the way you\'ve written their relationship is wonderful. So many times you find it\'s Duo who\'s the slave and Heero the cruel overbearing Lord. This is a really refreshing change from that, it\'s ironic that Hilde has been replaced by Heero because she got pregnant. I dread to think what\'s going to happen in the future when the curse on Heero rears it\'s ugly head.
The other plotlines are fantastic too, in fact the whole fic is incredible in my opinion. Really well thought out and it\'s presented well. No overly flowery language lol. It\'s simple, to the point, and it pulls you into the scene wonderfully. Keep it up. I\'m waiting for the next chapter with bated breath.
Ja ne, Natea.
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March 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Oh, please continue soon with more. And please, please... More Quatre and Trowa. I just love how you\'re portraying them. Please?
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December 22, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Very well writen with a style that makes for a very beautiful story, u use the laghuich to enhanse were it is needed. But u don't go into detail other times. I love it in short..... and exuse any spelling errors .. its 01.30 and I read your story true in just a cuple of houres! LOL
update this gem soon!
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update this gem soon!
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