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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um, i think you were making Trunks wimper and all that a bit too much ^^;
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should work on your grammar and punctuationn.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You just need to work on your grammar a bit. Or get a beta
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Awsome story. While the spelling and grammar weren\'t great, the story flowed perfectly, and never once did I think that Gohan\'s actions were wrong, which made it even better. Keep up the good work!
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMGS, THAT WAS PRETTY HOTTT. I think you need to add another chapter or like 10more cause that was
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great! E-mail me back please and tell me weather or not your gonna write one thanks! Ml SNl SN is.......
CharmedFreakBoi thanks bai bai