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March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love your story.
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November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Eh, a little corny. And it could use a bit more description on the ero-litacism...
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My favorite fanfic everrrr!!!! I absolutly love the way you captured the primal, dark, and twisted way that Vegeta has for expressing his feelings. And I love how you put it as a very dominant and overprotective mate, claiming Bulma as her queen and the thing with the destiny of both and the Saiyan-jin God... awesome. I really hope you keep writing Bulma and Vegeta lemon ff, with that kind of characterization for both of them. Great job!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please make more of this fic. I love it! I would like to know of the beginings. Do you have the story up somewhere?
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I role play on yahoo all the time with a Bardock person and that story reminded me of the first few times we role played. Both Bulma and Vegeta were in chariter as much as I could tell and I am a fan of tail fics as it is. Needs more chapters, I would love to read more on what happens.
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE....
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY good lemons. I really like it. There is only one problem: Saiyans turn into giant monkeys on full moons, which makes the first scene IMPOSSIBLE...i think...oh well...still really good
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no it can't be the end..what passion they have..as i read this story i come to realize how i really wish that they had shown so of how he felt for bulma,but i don't understand why is he and the others not getting alone.is this a AU ..please write more of this story...i just love the passion that these two have and want to read more of it...maria
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! i want more please!!!!!!!!!1
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Problems? What problems? I didn\'t read any problems.
Good Fic. mmmmmmmmmmmmm
Good Fic. mmmmmmmmmmmmm