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July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this story a few years ago, so it's very exciting to see it here, with new chapters no less! The last bit of the first chapter (with Abdul inserting the vibrator and balls, as well as him discovering the repression spell that was placed on Duo) was cut off for some reason. It's such an integral part of the story, and I only realized it because I had read that chapter before.
A very good start to the story. Eroticness plus intrigue. The sex scenes could use some more graphic details, but still, very enjoyable ^_^
A very good start to the story. Eroticness plus intrigue. The sex scenes could use some more graphic details, but still, very enjoyable ^_^
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if there was more to this story, you have a good thing going hate to see a story with promise on it's last legs..:( I hope you will update sometime..untill then..:D hugs
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wufei is one word.... in case you wanted to know... great story... please continue
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*loud whistles* WOWHO! MORE MORE MORE!
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is it hot in here or is it just me? You worte thaautiautifully and I can\'t wait to see what happens next in part 3
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September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
**DROOOOLL**
More Please?!
More Please?!
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi ya,
I must say that I am intriged as to how this story will progress. The amount of details that went into its telling was amazing.....I am now awaiting another syntelating chapter....
keep up the good word
J
I must say that I am intriged as to how this story will progress. The amount of details that went into its telling was amazing.....I am now awaiting another syntelating chapter....
keep up the good word
J
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August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...seems interesting. ^_^ Continue!