rate_review Reviews

Sorry for taking so long to review. ^_^
That chapter was... WOW!
There was so much going on, so many clues to this Prophecy.
Like what you said in your authors note, I was not expecting Kakarot and Vegeta to meet this soon. the meeting was not what I expected, (I could feel the tention) Figuratively speaking of course! ^_~

Anyway enough of my babling, I\'m looking forward to your next chap!!!

And I hope you feel better soon. ^-^

YAY, suspense, drama, action, love hate violence, and sooo much more *; )* BRING IT ON, PLZZZ u must continue with thiare are i say, masterpiece of your\'s I LOVE IT, I love the way portray each characters feelings, thoughts, and actions ; ) especially our dear Ouji\'s, what ever u do, keep up with the plot, keep in character and make it long, how bout just short of being an epic maybe? what ever u like, just keep it up, *muah* love ya thanks bunchies :)

This just gets betetr and better with every chapter. I can\'t evet ent enough. It\'s just awsome and fittignt hat Bardock can do the instaint tansmission tecnique!

More soon please?

So i have to beg?

*gets down on all fours*

I really enjoyed that chap, everything is unravaling now. Raditz seems to be coming closer and closer to the truth. I\'m really looking forward to the next chap, you\'ve left me hanging on the edge here. ^_^

This story keeps getting better. I think the interaction between young Bardock and Toma is just adorable! Ok... maybe not adorable, but it is very amusing. I look foreword to more. I wonder what decision Raditz has to make. Is he going to have to decide whether he\'ll look for his father or something? Anyway, I love this story and hope you\'ll update soon. I support your new plan; the more updates, the better! I can\'t wait for more. Also, when will Vegeta and Kakarot meet again? I hope its soon!! Keep up the great work, Blue Siren!!!

Okay, so it took me all day but I read all ten chapter so far. I love this fic. It was planned out pretty well. I wish I was better at planning fics. I can\'t wait for more.

How do you do it? This fic just keeps getting better. I am absolutly hooked! I must have more as soona s possible. And your lucky you\'ve got G-Mum at your back she won\'t streer you wrong!

Hi! Sorry about reviewing so late, its because I\'ve had a cold for the last week (still do) and basically I feel (and look like) sh*t. U_U
Anyways that was a great chap, learnt alot more about the characters now, like Raditz is Kakarots brother (I didn\'t know they were related in this fic, and with the prophecy its all getting a bit mysterious. But its kinda all begining to add up. As alway\'s, I\'m really looking forward to reading the next chap. ^_^

BTW, thanx for the review, I\'ve been considering getting my fics beta read but i don\'t know how. O_O
If you know anyone who could help please email me ^-^

This story just got beyond awsome, but still you have to watch for the simple mistakes, Like this \"The said old friend said sipping from his cup.\" remeber to re -read until you just can\'t stand to anymore, or get a really freaking good beta! Please please post soon! I can\'t get enough of this dark angsty fi, And damn what I wouldn\'t give to know Vijita\'s motives!!!!!

Darn it... Not many people are reviewing!!
Its obvious a lot of people like this fic. If you don\'t believe me, just look at how many hits you have. You have the most I\'ve seen.
Anyway, I must say I LOVE this fThe The first time I read it was when you first posted it on Mediaminer and I have always liked it even though there were always grammer errors. I would re-read and check daily just to see if you updated or not and I remember being upset when I found out that your fic wasn\'t there anymore. Then I ended up finding it here and with a new chapter and now, I come here daily hoping to see it updated.
This is my first review to any fic and I must say that I love where you havken ken this story and I hope you will continue to post. I just can\'t wait until all the secrets are out in the open and when Kakarotto will surrender. I want to know what happens next! I promise to review your other chapters when they come. PLEASE update soon!!!