rate_review Reviews

Always more, you tha that I am hopelessly addicted to this wonderful fic.

I totally love this story. You\'re a great, inspirationall writer. Please please write more. I can\'t get enough! I\'M HOOKED!

Once again brilliahap,hap, this fic truely is a work of art. (And all the other fics of yours I\'ve read.)
I just love the way you portray the characters, Vegeta let Kakarot mark him, in a way that is so emotional beautiful, how could Kakarot leave him...and poor Raditz, he is so in love with the Ouji, i feel kinda bad for him. (sorry getting to caught up in the drama there U_U;)
Anyway\'s i neeeed to read more, please update soon ^_^

Ack! You just had to leave it off like that. O well, i\'m waghting for your nupdaupdate. {Twitch Twitch} I hope its soon.

Yes reviewing is super importaint, with out my lovely reviwers I\'d never get anything accomplished.

I must say this story is delisciously angsty and provocitove. I keep wondering when that tail of Kakarotto\'s is going to grow back and the shit ts going to hit the fan, you did have a few grammer issues, the only one I recall is that you said \"what you do?\" instead of \'what did you did\" and you made a few mistakes liek this but nothing major, also your formatting was screwy in this chapter, you know strange symbols in place of some puncuation, but sometimes that can\'t be helped much.

I really hope you decide to continue this story it\'s deserving of your attention.

-Radditzsu

Oh yes the Vegeta POV was splendid! I loved ever tantilizing second of it, but my dear there are still a few spelling and grammer errors you have a tendency to leave out words here and there small words like, a, it, or ,the for example if you like I will point them out for you, but it\'s didn\'t effect my enjoyment of thre story at all so don\'t worry and I\'ll be egerly waiting your next chapter!

-raditz

The chaps were really good in Veg's P's POV, it helped me understand what Vegeta was feeling.
I feel really bad for Vegeta, yet i understand why Kakarot ran away.
I\'m looking forward to the next chap ^_^

Well girl I gotta tell ya, lol, you just keep dishing out the angst dontcha? But hey! I\'m not complaining! ^_~

Haven\'t heard from you in awhile, forgotten I exist or just nothing to talk about? Hey, mail me sometime if you want to chat okay? I\'ve been busy lately but it\'d be nice to hear from a friend.

~Hiriyou
\"Power to the gerbils!\"

::hugs story:: I FREAKING love this story! It is sooo good. I love the idea of this...Kakarott doing Vegeta\'s bidding all the while still waiting for himself to get strong enough to take his revenge out on the Prince. This story is breathtaking! I love how Vegeta is falling for Kakarott and everything I love everything!!! THIS STORY IS MY FAVE!!!!!!!!!!

WOW!!!!!! Lemme say one thing AWESOME!!!!! I love it! The story you have going here is perfect! Ooh I love, love, love how Kakarott continues to try and resist Vegeta and how insistent s ons on defeating him. Vegeta is so in character. I love how he continues to be himself but he drops little hints that shows he wants Kakarott to care for him the same way he cares for Kakarott. DAMN YOU!!!! For making me like a fic so much when Goku is not dominanat!!! YOU PEOPLE ARE GOING TO DESTROY ME WITH YOUR DOMINANT VEGETA\'S!!!! I can\'t heut lut love this story it is excellent. ~maybe a dominant Vegeta isn\'t so bad~ What am I saying? Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!! *.*