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July 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, that was intense! Now I got to go take a shower to cool off! When Vegeta started to thrust into Bulma on the ceiling while her parents were there, I laughed while shouting "NO!" Job well done!
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September 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was hot! I don't think I have ever read a b/v lemon where they do on the ceiling. That was genious. I like how you portrayed vegeta in this. He was perfect. Great fic. Hope you know that, and hope you write more in the future. :) thanks for it.
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September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hell i want a midnight snack like that
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe @ the last sentence. Oh Vegeta lol
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
standard! (london slang for : right on! or hevi or wicked!) hevi man hevi
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't ask me why I haven't read this one before. I love one-shots. I LOVE the way you write this couple. Excellently done.
This review would be longer, but I have to go to work. (At least now I'll have something niiiice to think about.)
This review would be longer, but I have to go to work. (At least now I'll have something niiiice to think about.)
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Omg! fucking on the ceiling! Aaaaiiiee!!! Sooo awesome!! So erotic! *drools over your descriptions* :D
~Ami
~Ami
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August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that was great!
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No one does a lemon like you Tempest! Ohh So So good! Thanks for the fic to tide me over till I get another chapter of Must not Chase the Boys.
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! That was one damn hot B/V lemon!!! Great premises and I can certainly envision Vegeta trapping Bulma in the kitchen midnight in CC. Bung, ng, I never thought of them getting it on on the ceiling ~ completely lost in their passion too!!! Great scene there :) Too bad you can\'t put this on ff.net ~ btw, plz plz plz update Against All Odds soon (or maybe post it here?)! Once again, you\'re awesome!