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for Peace, Love, and Family

by Selune

person Natea
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ak, you updated before I even managed to review your last chapter. The story\'s really starting to heat up now! I liked the whole prophecy, it explains a lot and yet brings a lot of new stuff into the mixing pot. Don\'t know about Harry but I wanted to go and give Heero a hug myself lol. What I\'m wondering now though is if Heero dreams the future is the box he dreamed about a few chapters back a memory or a prediction?

The scene between Neville and Harry was really sweet too, it\'s not a pairing that immediately springs to mind but I like it in this fic! I can\'t wait to read more. Sorry for not reviewing sooner. :(

Natea xx
person Kimbra-fire
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see Heero and Duo get together! They\'re such a good couple! And what about Quatre and Trowa?!?
person dreamer
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, quatre is very confusing. He is jealous of his brother and he doesn\'t know which. He doesn\'t even know why he is jealous. I hope he can solve his problems soon. I loved the part where heero was rude to the teacher and quatre decided to do the same. Its a change for once. Its not fair that if their having a bad day to take it out on the students. So all the brothers are oracles, thats so cool. I would like to have heeros powers. I think it would be cool. Anyway, why he looking at duo at the end? And was quatre really taught by the famous Claudia? If he was i bet snape will get even madder!! I can\'t wait or the next chapter. Take care and update soon.
person Natea
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens. Past, Present and Future....lol I like where this is going. I\'ve got to admit, I have some serious misgivings about this potion they were brewing in potion class, it sounds ominous.

I loved the scene with Heero outside the Divination class when Harry steadies him from the visions without realizing it. LOL and the Wizard of Oz remark was classic!!!! I seriously love the way you\'re portraying Quatre in this...I know I\'ve said it before lol but I do. He\'s so protective of Heero, it\'s a nice switch from Heero always being the strong one. There\'s bound to be a few ruffled feathers getting Harry into the mix and you\'re writing both Quatre\'s and Heero\'s insecurities over this really well.

I\'m looking forward to the next chapter now lol.

Ja

Natea xx
person dreamer
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! They made it into Gryffindor!!! Dorothy is obviously very pleased with being in Slytherin, bet she feels right at home. I wonder wherewa awa and duo were placed? I haven\'t seen them mentioned as to what house they were in. I thought the conversation between heero and the hat was very well written. I could hear it all in my head and i thought that heero made a very good point of proving why he belonged in Gryffindor. Anyway, they seem to have some admireres already. I just know those two girls are going to be trouble. They don\'t seem like the type to giive up untill they get what they want. I mean, they have to be in Gryffindor for a reason, right? They\'re not pushovers. t tht the dream heero was having, what was that about a box? Don\'t tell me someone stuffed my hee-chan in a box?!?! I\'ll kill them!!! I need to know what they did!!! So i can start planning their death. Hopefully i will get a whack at daemon. The part where they went to comfort harry was really nice. The 3 brothers together, sort of. Wonder what people will say in the morning when they find them like that. Anyway, i love this fic and i hope you update soon. Take care, ja!
person Natea
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Selune,

Sorry I wasn\'t able to review your last chapter...I had laptop problems. This is getting more and more intriguing all the time. I love Heero\'s reaction to the sorting hat, for one horrible moment I actually thought werewere going to put him in Hufflepuff. Your explanation of Quatre and Heero\'s relationship was really nicely written, I absolutely love Quatre in this. He\'s still sensitive but he\'s not weak in anyway and he seems fiercely protective of Heero.

Is Duo a Slytherin? I\'m just wondering because he seemed pretty pally with Draco on the train.

Please keep updating, I\'m really enjoying this fic and I like what you\'re doing to the whole Harry Potter cross theme.

Ja ne

Natea xx
person dreamer
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I loved the 2x1 part in this fic. It was so sweet and i love 2x1. Too bad heero had to leave. But why did he? And why is quatre being so pushy? I wish heero could have stayed with duo longer, now how is duo going to keep up his new years resoon, on, which was very sweet btw.
person dreamer
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, things are becoming more clear now. Heero, quatre and dorothy are on a mission, right? So thats why he left duo, even though he didn\'t want to. So who is this daemon guy? I really like this fiut iut it would be better if i knew who this guy was. Since heero doesn\'t like him, he obviously is bad news, but why? ANd what is duo going to say to heero now that he has no where left to go? Quatre can\'t push him out the window so theres nowhere left to go.
person Natea
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi Selune.

Things are hotting up now!!! I\'m really intrigued as to what\'s happened to Heero to give him magic (the whole \'fragile body over no magic\'). Duo\'s reaction when he sees Heero again is also going to be pretty explosive I reckon. And who the Dell is this Daemon guy?

Can\'t wait to read chapter 3 now. The whole fic is shaping up to be a refreshingly different Harry Potter, Gundam Wing cross.
person Natea
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooo this sounds intriguing! I was wary about reading it at first to be honest as I\'ve had the misfortune to come across a lot of strange Gundam Wing/Harry Potter crossovers. I\'m so glad I did!

I am extremely interested in what Heero and Quatre are up to lol. You\'re taking an old, overused story line and breathing something new into it. Please update soon.

Natea xx

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