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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Disturbing, but very good. Please, I want to know what happens next. A sequel, or at least another chapter?
*gives you the puppy eyes* Pretty please?
*gives you the puppy eyes* Pretty please?
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-_-
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why in the world are you no longer a member of ff.net ?
but sense you are no longer there, you should up date here more often
your story is a good one, keap it going
ja ne
but sense you are no longer there, you should up date here more often
your story is a good one, keap it going
ja ne
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Horrible story. I\'m not referring to your writing skills which are top notch. I mean the whole concept! Whoa! Gohan doing that to poor Goten, my favorite character.
Great the way you showed how this can really happen. Jelousy, hate and resentment of a sibling and father.
VERY, VERY graphic, but a great story. I hope you write more. You\'ve got a great imagination.
Tony :)
Great the way you showed how this can really happen. Jelousy, hate and resentment of a sibling and father.
VERY, VERY graphic, but a great story. I hope you write more. You\'ve got a great imagination.
Tony :)
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool, but is this the end?
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August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. that was very powerful! I could feel Gohan\'s anger and poor Goten! to be the victim of his brother\'s rage like that! *cries* But a good read anyway!
~Ami
~Ami