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egods! cliff hanger! nooooooo! update update! i love the plot and advancement so far, so keep writing more! ^_^

I really like this story, and your betaing aren't doing a very good job. I've seen quit a few grammar mistakes. I hope you get the creativity for this back real soon ^_^

This is very interesting. Why'd you stop writing? I'm curious as to what wil happen n WC%

I like this chapter can\'t wait until Trowa and Quatre finds the killer.

I just started reading your story and I really like it. I hope you up date soon; I would like to know what happens next.

*gasps* OH MY GOSH!?! Another victim? Doesn\'t ANYONE suspect anything?! All the victims are MALE and BLON..QU..QUATRE!!!!! *sighs* And that feather...Wait, it carom rom Quatre right? He\'s an Angel? *jumps up and down* But how come he was staring at it like he\'s never seen it before? maybe he doesn\'t know he\'s an Angel yet. *thinks* Hmmm...I wonder what was found on the feather...I really hope Trowa and Quatre become closer. And Trowa doesn\'t seem to have those nightmares anymore, but it still means his life is in danger, right? Though it couldn\'t be the killer because he\'s not blonde. But in his dream SOMEONE was trying to kill him and an Angel (probably Quatre...OOO! I hope it is! ^-^) was trying to save him. PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE update soon, k?!?! I\'ll be checking back!!! This is really mysterious! Do we know the killer? Is it one of the characters we all ready know?!?! UPDATE SOON!
luv,
Candy

This is getting soooooooo Goood! FINISH IT PLEASE!!!!! Pretty Pretty PLEASE!!!!

Okay, two things, 1) WRITE MORE SOON!! I love it, and it\'s not so crappy as you think. The plot is well-thought out, and while may not be unique it is at least refreshing. I really like how the characters are turning out. 2) I can\'t believe your beta-reader dropped you!! Oh well, look your mistakes in chapters two and three were all small and common. If you don\'t have a beta-reader I humbly ask if you\'d like one. Please e-mail me if you\'d like to take me up on the offer. I am very thorough, and will generally get the chapter/fic/whatever back to you before two days\' time.

YES!!! Another update!!! Well, Quatre seems to be taking over, maybe that\'s why Trowa doesn\'t like him. I mean, Quatre\'s great at his job! Hmm...those killings do sound very professionally done. *gasps* Wait a minute...a blonde MALE is next?! less than 5\'6.uldnuldn\'t Quatre qualify under that? And he does look extremely innocent for his age. *nods* Doesn\'t Trowa realize he has to protect him? Maybe if Quatre has a near-death experience with the killer but escapes some attack or something, then Trowa will realize he has an obligation. I wonder what accident happened that made Trowa have to write reports? Why does he think Quatre\'s so annoying? He\'s only trying to be kind...then again he\'s doing everything right, something that Trowa never did so maybe it\'s jealousy. Hopefully it\'ll soon turn into friendship...then something more. *grins* Hmmm...UPDATE THIS VERY SOON!!! I\'ll be checking back!!
luv,
Candy

Hey! I hope to see a new chapter soon! This was a well written story and can\'t wait to read more!!!! That dream and details you could really see what you where describing!!! Continue!!