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Lovely story

To the author if your still out there somewhere finish the story. what I read so far is really, really good. This a
different plot than some of the stories I have read. It was very refreshing.

I just have one question... Are Vegeta and Bulma married? I mean, on a current level? While Goku is with him? Because that part just throws me off.. But you don't have to answer if you don't want to. Just curious.. :) *hugs, cake, and brownies.

Loving this story. Please keep writing and let me know when the new chapter is up.

It's been a real real long time since I've gone back to read any DBZ yaoi fanfics seeing as I've gotten hooked on Naruto yaoi lately. But tonight I decided to go back and go through some DBZ yaoi and to my surprise I find that you had updated. I was soo happy because I still remember ur great story i truly hope you continue it and if it's not to much trouble maybe u can send me an e-mail to let me know the next time u update, or if ur still going to continue this amazing story.

i have missed you. i really enjoyed this story and have waited patiently for you to continue. i hope every thing is well enough for your creative writing juice to following to continue, the story.

Yay! I'm happy to see this one back again! Intrigue and smut and yakuza make me a happy girl.

I wonder what will happy if/when Raditz finally gets caught... How willing will Goku be then?

I will say that I hope you continue to write more. I actually enjoyed this a good deal. The writing style was very descriptive and yet not so much that you were overwhelmed by the details. I hope you continue to write and I would even love for you to write more on this story. It has been awhile since I read a good DBZ story they come so rarely. Thanks.

hi i just wanted to say how great it is your writting pixelgoddess recomended this story on her page once i read it i just couldn't put it down, and i hope you'll finish it. also hope your life is going a lot better than it was before.
anyway for anyone who sees this story i most strongly recomend it.hope the next chapter isn't to far away bye ^_^

Yay, you're back!!! I've always wanted to know how the rest of this story went and now I finally get to find out. MMmmm, and that was such a hot chapter too. I really wanna know why Raditz rebelled and why Bardock wouldn't stop him. Is there going to be some really big shoot-out in this thing, especially with Goku caught in the middle? I know I mentioned on one of the sites you posted this, what I thought a humanized Piccolo would look like. He doesn't have to be completely human looking, just cover the basics. He can be bald and wear the turban as a fashion statement. He shouldn't be green, green, but he could have a greenish tint to his skin, like what you see when somebody eats way to many peas or something like that. Pointy ears are okay, just so they're not over done. No antennae though, that would be to weird, or he could wear the turban all of the time and we can pretend they're there. Maybe Goku could imagine what Pic would look like without the turban on or something. The sharp teeth and nails are also okay as well, as long as they're not too impossible sounding. Just an idea, that's all. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.