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WOW I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT, PLZ PLZ OH PRETTY PLEASE DO GO ON WITH THIS STORY!!!!!! i love it *i love u thanks u for ur wonderful style of writing, u rule!!!!!! just keep this up, stay in character with everyone (especially the Ouji himself), and ill keep praiseing u *Oh Wonderful ONe*

This is both hot, and disturbing. I am looking forward to more. I have a weakness for Goku in chains at Vegeta\'s mercy....so this is great for me.

Wow. Just...wow...I don`t know what else to say.This is one of the best, most interesting storylines I`ve ever seen. Obviously they`re not Saya-jinns, so is Zarbon an alien or a human? I have trouble imagining him without his green skin^_^!! You really write Vegeta well, and Raditz is most intriguing in this situation. I can`t imagine what he really wants, or why Goku thinks he hates him, but I`ve allways liked Raditz, and I`m glad he`s in your story as a dark character, at least for now. The lemon was really intense, you sure studied the subject a lot before giving it a try, eh^_~?? And what makes the sex even better is that there isn`t too much of it, that we focus on an exiting storyline occasionally, too. I mean, PWP lemon gets boring pretty quickly if there`s no meaning, no reason, you know what I mean? I can not wait for your next chapter, I`ll be checking for updates....
White Dog

Ah, the bliss of ignorant parents… Loved the lemon by the by ^_^ if that’s what you write after 4hours of statistics (took me 2 tries to pass that one and you’re not kidding when you say it’s torture +_+) then I really can’t wait to see what you come up witxt! xt!

Nice story, poor Goku ><
and I can relate on the parents thing, Thank GOD my mother is so lousy at english or else shuld\uld\'ve killed me by now X.x

Yay, not only is this fantastic suspenseful fic at mediaminer, but i come here a find it aswell. Like ive said before i am extremely pleased with ur talent as a yaoi fic author and absolutely LOVE this fic, pretty please update some time and keep up the wonderful work eh. Arigato, til next time....

Loving it please write more
Let goku and vegeta work things out but please have bit more pain in there

SHIT....THAT WAS OFF THE CHAIN. KEEP GOING YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO. TALKING ABOUT YOU BLUSHING WITH EMBRASSMENT YOU SHOULDA SEEN ME.

JUST DO WHAT U DO.

- JAMES BOND

i so glad you are writing more this fic is great!!!!!!!! update soon please

wow! that was soo great. one of my favorite stories so far. i hope you update it soon!